All Comments on 'Serendipity'

Such a fag.

I like the way you turn a phrase and this type of playing with words is what I do, and like. Thanks for the fun.

The names were a little cheesy, but I like your writing style and you've got good grammar. In my mind, on this site that pretty much makes you a hero.

I cannot agree with the first commenter .. "Your" a fag. If you're going to insult someone, anonymously, the least you can do is spell it correctly. . . . .

The second commenter placed you on a grammatical pedestal, but alas, must have passed by the 'grading' of the cheese, the greens in the 'frig' and the 'frenetic' love after being saved 'of' an epiphany. . . .

As you climb down from that pedestal, be comforted by having written a Very Good, Very Concise and very funny piece. . .

Cheers and Congrats. . .

Kilroy

Not exactly erotic, but well written and fun to read!