All Comments on 'Serendipity For Two'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Apparently, you've forgiven Traci.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good story, well written, just needed a tad more love making.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 1 year ago

Nice to see one where Traci wasn't a cheater,

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"He hoped he would never have to use that recording." = I think he's safe. Kathy gave it her best shot, but respected that he wouldn't cheat.

Omart57Omart57over 1 year ago

Well done, H! A great read!

Lorry3188Lorry3188over 1 year ago

Love works in mysterious ways great reversal of the older man younger women scenario

TexdomTexdomover 1 year ago

This one hit close to home. I went to school with a guy (same class in high school), dated his younger sister (a year behind us) and then married his mom. I was 18 she was 35 and this January it will be 43 years for us. Thanks for the read!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

excellent..!!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 1 year ago

Yes on all 5 stars.

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

Loved it, Thanks! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Regguy69Regguy69over 1 year ago

Ahhh, for once Traci is a dream come true and not some horrid bitch!

Excellent story love and devotion, thanks for sharing!

SplitGeode66SplitGeode66over 1 year ago

A weird but excellent story. The weirdest aspect was a Hooked story in which Traci is not a cheater! Well done. 5 stars.

Hiram325Hiram325over 1 year ago

Excellent! 5 Stars.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 1 year ago

Fun story, quite well written. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
Great Romance Story

Thanks for the effort.

BSreaderBSreaderover 1 year ago
Over the top

Even for this group but your still a good writer I can't this would happen

mac1729mac1729over 1 year ago

Really sweet romance

Thanks for writing

rodryder44rodryder44over 1 year ago

A lovely romance. There is an eighteen year age gap between Traci and RJ, but age is meaningless at Literotica. Four stars.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 1 year ago

Really sweet tale and I was glad to see RJ live up to the “really good man” moniker near the end when he had the chance to sample the younger Cathy. It was nice, too, that she took no for an answer and backed off without causing more trouble. Great job and thanks for participating in the challenge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lovely. QuickMagazine, that's me, can see why this went into Mature, though Romance would also have worked. Hooked’s visited May/December before with “Mikey’s Mom” and “The Barkley Chronicles.” Others have noted the novelty here of Traci being good and faithful. And a solid QuickMagazine 4 for this H57 entry (of 3) in the Percy event.

MattblackUKMattblackUKover 1 year ago

That was a nice story. He gave her his heart and she kept it safe. 5*

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 1 year ago

What mother does this? ABSURD!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You get a five because I can't give you a ten.

prinnaveaprinnaveaover 1 year ago

Great story! Loved it! Lovely May-September romance story Hooked. Like someone else stated you get 5 because I can't give you anymore.

slowhand21slowhand21over 1 year ago

Got worried that she would end up cheating on RJ. Her name is Traci after all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Roger is a stupid cuck giving in to his whore wife

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Quite unique for this author.

oldtwitoldtwitover 1 year ago

I thought it a nice simple love story, not bad at all

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

First non slut Traci R. H.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well done!

DINGDONG33DINGDONG33about 1 year ago

Very good story and the tell and writing could not be better keep them coming, I'll keep reading them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Cradle snatching bitches

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You most likely have the same feelings as I for older women to come up with a love story as this. Will I be seeing more?

XluckyleeXluckylee10 months ago

You are a really good writer Thank you for sharing 5 stars from Xluckylee

ejsathomeejsathome9 months ago

Wonderfully touching story, full of love. Thank you.

WetheNorthWetheNorth8 months ago

"Well, you can't blame a girl for trying."

Dumb cliché

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Economy of dating? Guess how much he saved by not chasing girls or worse yet their genitals?

Enough to spoil his lovely daughter and wife.

It was like investing in fine wine instead of renting cases of beer, bar stools, hangovers and motels. No divorce or BTB vengeance. Classic.

SeaChangerSeaChanger6 months ago

I bet any real Traci is happy to read this lol.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

a little different,but very good . thanks !!

LoriRobinsonGaLoriRobinsonGa5 months ago

Well that was different but interesting.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Lovely story. Finally a Traci who gets a happy ending and is a good woman.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Sweet!!

TheOldStudTheOldStudabout 2 months ago

Three cheers for Traci !!!

jjfronjjfron11 days ago

Well done...remember, it's only a number.

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