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"Mike? Mickey? I'm sorry," Rhonda said. "I am so, so sorry."
THE END
**Author's Note: I write these stories for my pleasure; I post them here for your enjoyment. I thank you sincerely for reading my stories.
I especially thank those that take the time to leave comments, good and bad, and those that take the time to rate my stories.
Have a great day. Go get you some brisket. Or a burger. Or maybe some spaghetti with hot dogs cut up in it.
(The minister, Brandon Wright is a character from the 'Just A Nice Boy' series in the Incest/Taboo Sex category.
Bobby Wurtzen is a character from 'Well-Worn Path' in the Group Sex category.
The bar, Tijuana Jack's was mentioned in 'Each Day' in the Loving Wives category.
Even though they were but bit players in this cast, I still thought it prudent to mention their contribution to this tale.)
And, once again, thank you for reading my stories.
- COMMENTS
Jonnyflies5 months agoLet NO-ONE tell you how to write a story Jim!
Speaking as someone who sometimes struggles with "American English" because I was brought up with "English -English", I could take issue with the "Americanisms", your spellings and missed words in your stories, but even after that I cannot find issues with your ability to craft a story.
Congratulations on this most entertaining tale, even with it's unexpected and rather 'dark' ending.
I 'hated', but loved that sad twist in the ending, but withough Mike gaining 'Saint-hood', how else were you going to extract hi from his perfect life?
This was the first of your stories I have read, but assure you it will NOT be the last. - Congratulations!
Anonymous8 months agoSome anony 3 days ago, trying to tell JimBob44 how to write a story?
That's as funny a comment as I have ever seen on here.
What you were reading is not just senseless hacking at a keyboard, anony... it's JimBob44's style. His trademark.
It's well established, and well practiced, creating an entire universe of characters that all live and love together in that world.
It has a particular flavor, one that is enjoyed by a very wide, very receptive and very loyal audience.
A misspelt word here or there means nothing, but the grammar and the tone found in the telling of his stories are irreplaceable, and his alone to create.
When you read it, you know you are entering another reality, and it's one I love to visit, time and time again.
Just like Vandenonium's Dave, or JPB's Bob, it would not be a JimBob44 story without it, and it does not need to be corrected.
Just so you know.
At least you were trying to give constructive criticism, I will give you that.
Anonymous8 months agoIt seems pretty realistic in the sense of relationships with his kids and how some things remain unchanged.
Still, some plot points were left barely touched or untouched, major grammar errors that can be offputting and you switched moments drastically. I.e. one moment he's in one place, the very next sentence he's in a different place a few weeks later. Try adding at least some dashes or something as to not generate unnecessary confusion.
