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Click here"Mike? Mickey? I'm sorry," Rhonda said. "I am so, so sorry."
THE END
**Author's Note: I write these stories for my pleasure; I post them here for your enjoyment. I thank you sincerely for reading my stories.
I especially thank those that take the time to leave comments, good and bad, and those that take the time to rate my stories.
Have a great day. Go get you some brisket. Or a burger. Or maybe some spaghetti with hot dogs cut up in it.
(The minister, Brandon Wright is a character from the 'Just A Nice Boy' series in the Incest/Taboo Sex category.
Bobby Wurtzen is a character from 'Well-Worn Path' in the Group Sex category.
The bar, Tijuana Jack's was mentioned in 'Each Day' in the Loving Wives category.
Even though they were but bit players in this cast, I still thought it prudent to mention their contribution to this tale.)
And, once again, thank you for reading my stories.
- COMMENTS
FaShUnPhOtOg6 days agoHaving lived in Miss’sippi for part of my life, I had good friends from Loozianna. Some were Cajun. Even still, I didn’t care for the way JimBob wrote the accents. It seemed too over the top for me. In spite of that, I enjoyed the story immensely. I teared up at the end.
I related all too well with the MC. First, my name is Michael. Second, I went through a messy divorce in which my cheating ex and her family tried their damndest to turn the kids against me - even though I had full custody. They succeeded to a large extent. I did not walk my daughter down the aisle for her first wedding - I refused to attend when she told me I would not have that honor. It was only two years later when her first husband kicked her and her infant daughter out into the snow and ice when she called daddy for help. Of course I did. She is my daughter after all. Years later I had the honor of officiating at here second wedding. Things are better but not near where they were when she was a child. She still calls daddy for help when needed.
Her brothers are another story.
One sign of a good author is their ability to create identifiable characters. JimBob did that very well in this story. 4⭐️s
Jonnyflies6 months agoLet NO-ONE tell you how to write a story Jim!
Speaking as someone who sometimes struggles with "American English" because I was brought up with "English -English", I could take issue with the "Americanisms", your spellings and missed words in your stories, but even after that I cannot find issues with your ability to craft a story.
Congratulations on this most entertaining tale, even with it's unexpected and rather 'dark' ending.
I 'hated', but loved that sad twist in the ending, but withough Mike gaining 'Saint-hood', how else were you going to extract hi from his perfect life?
This was the first of your stories I have read, but assure you it will NOT be the last. - Congratulations!
Anonymous8 months agoSome anony 3 days ago, trying to tell JimBob44 how to write a story?
That's as funny a comment as I have ever seen on here.
What you were reading is not just senseless hacking at a keyboard, anony... it's JimBob44's style. His trademark.
It's well established, and well practiced, creating an entire universe of characters that all live and love together in that world.
It has a particular flavor, one that is enjoyed by a very wide, very receptive and very loyal audience.
A misspelt word here or there means nothing, but the grammar and the tone found in the telling of his stories are irreplaceable, and his alone to create.
When you read it, you know you are entering another reality, and it's one I love to visit, time and time again.
Just like Vandenonium's Dave, or JPB's Bob, it would not be a JimBob44 story without it, and it does not need to be corrected.
Just so you know.
At least you were trying to give constructive criticism, I will give you that.
