All Comments on 'Seven Days Ch. 04'

That was an amazing chapter. It was definitely worth the wait. I have to say you are the BEST writer on Literotica. Your stuff is just so good.

Please Update soon.

I am eagerly awaiting chapter 5. I'd like to know when it drops, my e-mail addy is caharris85@live.com. Thanks.

FINALLY rough sex in the shower leads to wonderful kisses!!!! yay, god forbid anyone gets shot in the next chapter or dies or is held for more money!! girl keep doing your thing because you have soooooo much talent!!

Can't wait to see what happens with Sonny and the Russians. Another great Chapter Soular. Keep up the great work, your fan Indy!

Hey! Loved the story would love the e-mail update for chapter 5 when ever you finish it. Contessanoir@yahoo.com

OMG! OMG! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE! I NEED MY WEEKLY INTAKE OF NIC AND VICTORIA!! :)

I really am enjoying this story. It's a very good plot with wonderfully developed characters. I too anxiously await the next chapter.

I loved it!!! 100%.

Soular, this story just keeps getting better with each chapter. OMG! Nic is scorching HOT beyond words. He's fronting as Mr. Cool. No wonder he and the Ice Princess Amber gave each other frostbite. Nic and Vic can burn the house down. I'm pleased to learn that he is college-educated and has a passion and hobby beside breaking kneecaps. Could he possibly give up "the business" for Victoria and settle for "normal" as say, a practicing architect? As if he'd ever need more money to live on. Can't wait for chapter 5.

In my opinion, by far the best story I've ever read on Literotica. I keep checking every day for a new chapter, never felt the need to do that before. Soular you have an amazing way with words and I'm just dying to find out what happens next in this story.

...freaking awesome and HOT. It's like slow, very enjoyable torture. You are a wonderful writer! Please, please continue lol.

OK, I'm officially addicted to this story! WOW!! Victoria and Nic are HOT, HOT, HOT!!! This is truly a terrific suspenseful and erotic tale. I sure hope they can find the right balance in their lives to continue a real relationship. I love how Victoria is standing her ground, especially with Amber. I hope Vic stays courageous,strong and open with Nic. I hope Nic can get his head on straight but see how truly important Vic is in his life, cause he's hooked.

Another great job Soular. I hope chapter 5 follows soon, I am so in need of another fix of Nic and Vic!

This story sucks you in. Each chapter unfolds new complex dimensions for both characters; vulnerability; darkness; strength and mutual sexual attraction. I can't think of a specific favourite moment there are so many. The respective inner dialogues of Nic and Victoria show that they bring out something unique in the other. There's a kind of alchemy that your writing uncovers as a blend they create particularly 'golden' erotic moments ranging from tender to the rough hard core sensual sexual release. Each layer of this story just gets richer. gracias

As with Damn Dress, you're building this story beautifully. Just as I knew you would.

Interesting it is getting more interesting. You go Victoria standing up for yourself. If he your man Ambrea go get him. Nicolas is falling hard for Victoria. The whole time I was reading story the song KISS THE GIRL was running thur my head.

Soular you are the bomb girl. You are amazing skillful writer. I bow to your greatness.

If possible, it just keeps getting better and better!! Update ASAP!!

This story is getting better and better. Nic, the bad boy, falling for the good girl, is typical, but you've written it so well, it's like it's never been done before. I have a feeling before this story ends, there will be something drastic happening that will finally make both Victoria and Nic admit their true feelings for each other.

....One kiss breaks it all. lol

Nic n vampire? Reminds me of Robert Pattinson, the Twilight hottie. Nic could be the hottest vampire ever!!! lol

He can marks me whenever he want to, n i won't mind! ;D

Keep the jealousy coming, Soular. I'd like to see another hottie hits Vic! Nic will be so damn pissed!!! lol

Another great hardwork as usual, girl! U got me prisoned on this side every minute, hour and day!!!! And i don't mind. ;D Keep it coming! Peace!

~Selly

Another fantastic chapter!! Almost burnt my cooking as I was that deep into reading it.

Victoria might be physically weaker, but she definitely mentally stronger. Nic is starting to lose it. Great! Hopefully he'll change careers and turn to architecture.

Hurry up with the next TWO chapters please. Only got 5 more days before I'm internet-deprived :-)

I love this story! I didn't care all that much for Damn Dress, but I couldn't stop reading it! :) This one though, wow! You've got a lead female who we can admire and respect and a lead male who we can't help but love, despite his flaws. Thank you thank you thank you! Keep up the great work.

Great update...I think that he is falling in love with her...he is messing up big time. Thanks

WOW, it just keeps on getting better and better.That was one juicy, satisfying chapter. Thanx for that and keep it commin!!!

he is SOOOO sprung! That's my girl! Great chapter.

great chapter! amber is such a damn bitch! nic is so sprung!

love it!

So nice to see Nic falling hard! And Victoria has no clue at all. Fantastic chapter, Soular. Love these characters!

So nice to see Nic falling hard! And Victoria has no clue at all. Fantastic chapter, Soular. Love these characters!

I like the way you've developed Nick and Victoria's relationship. Watching Nick Fall in love with Victoria is just fabulous. I would love to see Amber did her ass kicked by Victoria sometime during the next chapter. Thank you for great series of stories.

But.....getting ready for the two of them to figure out that they love each other! Excellent character development. It would be nice to have some idea where we are in the time line; it's obviously well past seven days, but that was an obvious probability from early on.

-- KK in Texas

OMG!! dat was amazing!!! ive been checking back everyday and it was SO worth it!! plz bring out the next one ASAP!!!

Finally! I had been itching all week to read an update on this story! Darn you! It was great! I absolutely loved it!

Please, please, PLEASE make sure to include or let it be discovered what Sonny told Victoria at the party about her being on her back! I can't wait to read about Nic making him pay for saying that!

And I hope to see Victoria get into a good catfight with Amber! That would be E.P.I.C!

Oh oh oh. Please release your updates sooner! I know, so selfish of me but this story is so good!

Very very good writing. Tons of emotions! Very descriptive writing! OMG! Somebody hand me a tissue please! I cried, I laughed, I fumed, I sighed, I oohs and aahs over every paragraph. Stunning! Thank you Soular! Waiting for next chapter patiently!

Another wonderful chapter. He needs to go on an admit he is falling in Love with her or should I say is already in Love with her.

Pleeeeaaase give us more soon!!

MY GOODNESS! I love you & this story and every other story you have written and/or will write!

Yet again, another exciting chapter. Loved tipsy Victoria and how that made Nic re-evaluate how he was behaving. Also, the KISS...wonderfully done. *sigh* Waiting anxiously for the next chapter. SZ

You have a perfect 5.00! Watch though because it's going to be somebody hating and bring it down. But anyways, I loved loved loved it. Do your thing girl.

As always, girlie. You know we're dying for the next one right? Right? lol. Thanks for the explosive chapter and I seriously can't wait to see where you take us next! Bookend #1 :)

Another masterpiece. Please update soon.

Nic obviously isn't recognizing the signs that he's falling hard for Victoria. It's going to be hella interesting when he does.

If this was a paperback I would sneak it to work and read it all day! Talk about a page turner.

OMG i love your work i seriously do! the kiss! OMG WOW! wat a kiss that waS!! anyhoo curiosity is there and i jus wud love to know wat nic said in italian "Cazzo, lei mi ha matto" have no idea wat it means. anyhoo goodness i hope the russians dont do anythign to ruin this story its HELLA PERFECT :D

He is so in love with Vic!!!! So much he is messing up his business..maybe that is for the btter..hmmm...a new leaf maybe...we shall see. I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Doesn't that mean "I'm angry, fuck you?"

Heh, I'm not getting it. I was only able to understand a bit of it. Anywho, BEAUTIFUL 4TH CHAPTER AND YOU HAVEN'T KEPT US WAITING SO LONG! WHICH IS A GOOD THING, YOU CAN WRITE FAST AND EFFICIENTLY.

Man, I've been out of the loop, but this story is fantastic. Great follow-up after Damn Dress. Nick and Victoria are very well, thought through characters. Really hot sex scenes as well. I think "Cazzo, lei mi ha matto" means "Shit/Fuck, she has/makes me crazy" or something like that. But, I'm not Italian, so that's the best I can do. Keep it up Soular, you're doing an amazing job! Keep us begging for more.

Will

Im so happy that the story is goin to be a happy ending! Its sure seems that way, so yes i hope to read more and see what happens to them in the end.

I am still trying to figure the italian. I think it means ?@#$, she makes me crazy, but I think that would be cazzo, lei mi fa matto, but I am not too sure. I am enjoying the cross purposes that are driving the characters into misunderstanding and a passive-aggressive love-hate relationship.

Oh My God!

This story is amazing!

I can't wait to read more of it.I love the ending of the 4th chapter where they finally kiss.And that Italian man couldn't sound anymore sex-o-licious!GOODNESS!

One of the Best i've read in awhile..

i would love to read more(AND SOON PLEASE!!!!!)

Oh my gosh! you have me so hooked on this story that i am waiting with baited breath until the next installment...keep them coming...i know it's going to be excellent...

I read danm dress and i felt tears coming to my eyes sometime but its chapter of seven days made me cry. I actualy felt the emotions and pains of Vicky. Well done, i think you are the best writer on this site

Seriously!!! I love ur stories! I stumbled on damn dress by accident and I loved it so i kept looking for things u write and this is just as good! I'm definitely NOT disappointed!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work...don't keep us waiting, i'm not sure i can take the anticipation!!!

Love ur stories. Huge Fan!

LOVE IT LOVE IT, I CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER FIVE. KEEP IT COMING YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER, I LOVED DAMNED DRESS TOO.

Yet another great chapter you are the absolute best author on this site your story freakin rocks with no socks

and I noticed you put If I Were a Boy on it. When I read the first 3 chapters that was the one song that came to my head that best described the story so far. LOL! I was so surprised to see that listed but I guess you thought it described how Victoria was feeling too.

Had read Damn Dress and had loved it !! I have a feeling I m going to like Seven days even more!!! Am already loving this even better..

Please post the next instalment soon..and the next..and the next :D

I would love to see more character development regarding Nic’s turmoil from his feelings for Victoria. Per your latest installment, he seems to be succumbing too fast-very unorthodox for gangsters/mob bosses. What’s the rush? This story can go in so many directions. Yes, he’s a criminal with a conscious, but he certainly hasn’t achieved his earnings by tapping into it too often.

I’d like to read more about the inner struggles tough Alpha male faces when falling in love. Much like Brandon, Nic is complicated. That’s why we love him!

This latest installment took from his complexity. I love your style of writing! I just don’t want to see this masterpiece in the making, rushed.

Just my opinion.

Better than ok! I'm being drawn in to your stories as usual. Very addictive.....

i loved it so much, Im just anxious to see what kind of trouble this distraction is going to bring, and can you have them do it on the beach that would be hot , I love his jealousy its so sexy to me, and Nic is so fuckin hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! and funny , the thing with the haands had me cracking up,. and when she slapped him. Keep it coming -(Sex on the beach)

i loved it so much, Im just anxious to see what kind of trouble this distraction is going to bring, and can you have them do it on the beach that would be hot , I love his jealousy its so sexy to me, and Nic is so fuckin hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! and funny , the thing with the haands had me cracking up,. and when she slapped him. Keep it coming -(Sex on the beach)

i loved it so much, Im just anxious to see what kind of trouble this distraction is going to bring, and can you have them do it on the beach that would be hot , I love his jealousy its so sexy to me, and Nic is so fuckin hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! and funny , the thing with the haands had me cracking up,. and when she slapped him. Keep it coming -(Sex on the beach)

i loved it so much, Im just anxious to see what kind of trouble this distraction is going to bring, and can you have them do it on the beach that would be hot , I love his jealousy its so sexy to me, and Nic is so fuckin hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! and funny , the thing with the haands had me cracking up,. and when she slapped him. Keep it coming -(Sex on the beach)

i loved it so much, Im just anxious to see what kind of trouble this distraction is going to bring, and can you have them do it on the beach that would be hot , I love his jealousy its so sexy to me, and Nic is so fuckin hotttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!! and funny , the thing with the haands had me cracking up,. and when she slapped him. Keep it coming -(Sex on the beach)

loved the newest installment!

Keep on writing! Cant wait for the new chapter... hopefully's its soon!

Love all your stories. Keep up the good work!!!

I loveeeee nic, and I can't wait any longer for chapter5..hurry please!!

I love, love, love this story. And this chapter in particular was amazing. Great character development for both of them, lots of twists and turns in the plot. Interesting supporting characters. I just love it. I'm so excited for chapter 5 tomorrow!

What an amazing story. The sex is so hot.

Love the shower scene. Intense.

i just found this story earlier this morning and i can't stop reading. my friend, manny just told me that when nic said, "Cazzo, lei mi ha matto" he said 'fuck you i was crazy' is that true?

Translation: 'Fuck, she makes me crazy.'

you have one mean way of provoking every emotion out of a person in one chapter. Nic is so rough and tasty and he is so pussy whipped haha! Victoria is all class, you want her as your sister haha! Man do they suit!!

Nic is one sexy motherfucker. He's so cold, aggressive, and passionate. Damn, I love it!

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I only wish Literotica allowed more then 5 stars....well, that, and that this story had more chapters then it does...hint hint...lol...thanks for shareing your talent with us!

Alpha males all the way!! what does a girl have to do to get one of them hmmm...

I rarely read anything twice but even the third time round, I love this story. Soular you are amazing!

Finally, he allows the ice to began to thaw around his heart; as he starts to really feel for Victoria,

this chapter hadn't sunk in so now as I re-read it for the 4 th time I cried & I felt heartbroken for Victoria & Guilty for Nic. But I know how this ends so it'll be ok .

you are wonderful i love it

nic is the best chracter more or a cold hearted individual that denies his love for vic but i think it should have stayed that way missing the blowjob scenes thou

The characters are underdeveloped, the plot obvious and the sex lacking. I really dont understand the symphony of praise.

However, keep writing, Its a matter of practise.

You are the dopest writer on this site. Don't let the hate deter you. I freakin love Nic & Victoria even though Nic was such an ass to her at first.Best freakin series ever. I want more where's Sonny's story? This stuff is like crack, you've got me addicted.

Below me said. The person leaving these comments is obviously a hater, nothing more. I doubt you're going to let this person phase you but still just know his words have no bearing at all on your writing.

Do yourself a favor and stop reading this story. The depth and skill; this author has is beyond your negative mind. Try writing a story that is complex and fluid as "Seven Days". You suffer from bitter grapes because you cannot write and you lack the ablity. Thank you Bain.

I fucking love this story! Great job!

I have read a lot of pocketbooks and i think your story is great. Glad there are no glitches and holes in it. Dont mind the haters or negative comments maybe they are looking for a hardcore action or a mushy love story. LOL

Your story is better than a lot of the printed romance novels I've read lately. Great character development and fluid story line. No distracting typos or grammatical errors. I may spend my whole day reading your entries.

I love reading this series! There are some really good authors on this site and I'm reading one of theirs story! I can't stop reading this story and can't wait to see what happen next!

They been freakin all this time and she haven't had a period? She pregnant?

Really? If you read the damn book you would see she is on birth control. All females don't have periods while on the pill. She probably has a brand that stops all periods.

BECAUSE IT IS SO GOOD!

Nic: "Fine, get your shit and lets go," yesssss lol . . .

That last dominating shower bit was epic. I am dreading the end of this story. I don't want it to!

According to Google Translate is: Shit, you got me crazy.

And I still get giddy like a teenager about Nic and Victoria! 😍😍😍

It's literally been years that I have been reading and rereading this story.

This story really needs to be published. I would get so upset if my bookmark disappeared one day. This has to be the chapter I get hooked into reading again, and again lol.

I wonder if we could ever have a spin off on Minka and Raymond?

...that the reason the first 4-5 chapters of this story are my absolute favorite is because of my free use kink that I only realized I had a few months ago. But I’ve returned to this story for 10 years, so it’s obviously been there for that long lol. I’m blown away by this realization! Haha