All Comments on 'Seven Years as a Wife Ch. 05'

So good ..

This is getting good. I just discovered your story today, read all the chapters, and can't wait the next.

Outstanding story. Looking forward to more.

Oh you have to keep going now. This is getting good, no great.

Thank you all for your comments. I enjoy writing and make mistakes. It takes me about 4 house to write 1500 words. I give it a brief read through, so there will be mistakes. For me it is about the story, not the grammer.

I writ using WORD , and the grammar check can be "odd".

I get in from work and write in stealth. I'm a married closet trans, if that makes sense. Can't come out for fear of losing my job, home and family. I travel a lot with work which allows "Leeanna" time.

"about 4 house" 4 hours. Bloody hell LOL

So good, my favorite chapter so far...

This is a wonderful story, Mel is adorable and I love the way the story line flows. Please a new chapter asap, no pressure…well maybe just a little.

Veronica

Thanks Sabrina, I have lots more of this. it's around 38,000 word long. may put it on Amazon

More please. This is so good.

Sorry this comment was meant for Surgeons Lodger " it's around 38,000 word long. may put it on Amazon"

Such a heart felt chapter dealing with the emotional issues, I’ve really enjoyed everything about this story so far . 🥰

Best one yet

Thanks I'm going to write some more tonight.

It's nice to read a story where a trans person is not seen wholly as a sex object.

People transition for reasons other than just sex.

Very very enjoyable and absorbing.

Mel has found out how the schmuck, David, is going to take Simon down, but has she told him about Simon's plan? Have I missed something here? Is she going to tell him then will Simon get the inventor of the Battery Charger to sign up, on the quiet, with a deal about a Patent for his invention, and will David be out-manoeuvered, "Fall on his Sword", resign from the Company and will Simon pick up David's Shares really cheap? Perhaps all this will come to pass in Chapter 07?