All Comments on 'Sex Dungeon'

Made me tear up a little...

Damn Onion Ninjas!

I know you said this story is a one off...but my feelin's wouldn't be hurt none if you were to write another short one about Trevor.

Thank you.

Completely had me captured in this tale, hopefully the first of many. The characters, the details, the emotions - simply overwhelming.

And yes, I teared up at Thorn's death.

Please continue writing this tale.

5/5 (would give many many more)

Drew me into the world just as it did Trevor. Amazing writing. Great work.

That was one of the best storys I have ever read sequal please!

I just spent several minutes using Google to attempt to come up with a title for this review that would do the story justice, and failed. I'm hooked. I was already a devoted reader, checking back frequently for new stories, but in addition I'm really wanting yet fearful of the continuation of this story. It would drive me to distraction if you weren't to write more, yet I fear where it's going. Please, please, continue the story. My imagination leads me to dark places, and I'd greatly prefer to immerse myself in your rendition.

Ending left tears in my eyes. Probably my longest and most engaging masturbation ever.

This is one of the best stories I have read on here.

That is truly a great story . Wonderful and touching . You are truly a master of words and story telling . Blessed Be ..

I loved the whole thing from start to finish, the writing style is really captivating, the story original and you can see there was a lot of thought put into it. I came four times while reading this, so kudos, mate, it's really enjoying for women as well. Can't wait to read more of your stuff

Wow, I considered myself fairly decent at writing until I read this. Fan fucking tastic. Cant wait to read more of your stuff

Totaly engrossing read. Loved the mixing of concepts.5*all the way!

More please.

I enjoyed the story. Thank you

Any chance of adding to this story? Make it into a short series? You know 45 - 50 chapter's?

So it was pretty interesting and enjoyable read, just poorly edited and rushed more like a first draft than a final. The main flaw is the main character is an unchallenged Mary-sue, case and point is the dragon "fight" at the end. This was rushed writing, several new powers were invented and ascribed to the main character mid action.

Shut up and take your 5 stars.

I really liked this one. Still need an editor - so many grammatical and spelling errors.

wow what a story, great read, thanks

Excellent tale. I want more... But perfect ending

nice