All Comments on 'Sex Toy'

or she is the most crude female that I've encountered.

Her characters are out of a drunk males jerk off fantasy about the most recent girl to reject his advances.

NoPantyGirl,

Your story is fantasy which is just fine with me. I read it in that frame of mind. You, my dear, are a good writer. Don't mind the don/donna connection. Maybe someday they'll take time to write story number 2.

Not written in very attractive manner. but gives some ecstasy at least to compel me to jerk off while reading.