All Comments on 'Sex with My Real Chachi'

Did... you... use... enough... periods... in... your... story?

Maybe... on... your... next... one... you... can... use... more.

Please do not use highfalutin words such as periods while commenting on this masterpiece. I am in no doubt that the author of this brilliant story- with its absolutely believable plot, the expert use of grammar in it & its detailed build-up- will win the Cretin's Award for the best erotic story in every galaxy whose inhabitants are lucky enough to lay their eyes on it.

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Worst story ever read