All Comments on 'Sex with My Sister-In-Law'

She sounds like an interesting lady. I'd love to read more about her.

I hope we can read more about this family ;-)

Sorry, I have a thing about spelling and grammar. The odd error is always forgivable but there were so many here that I have up reading it after a few paragraphs.

You had me hard the entire story.

Hope you continue to add more CHAPTERS.

Formulaic. Descriptions like "beautiful" and "perfect nipples" only tell us what YOU see. They don't paint a picture for us. I don't feel that at the end of the story I knew anything about any of the characters.

Enjoyed your story very much and look forward to reading more in the future. It would be nice if they were more than one page.

use Spell Check and get an Editor before your next submission

or write your story and walk away. come back a few days later and reread it.

Once they started fucking You told everything important in their first hour. Stories like this need something more than just sex. Maybe the wife walks in on them and joins them.