by Luvtoplay50
That was a great story, I've texted the wrong person before but never on that scale. I like how it was brief and to the point, perfect for a one off story.
great set up but you kind of "yadda-yadda-ed" thru the best part. would have liked more details on their love making. perhaps in chapter 2 when the wife catches them!
I thought this was quite a nice read, only wish it'd been a little more detailed and longer. Good job, looking forward to more stories from you.
I agree with peebuddy. Great setup! If you add detail to the sex it would be really hot.
It was hot and sexy and started off with a great erotic build to it then you hit the damn gas and went zero to 100mph in 3 seconds. Pacing and letting the story build to a climax really draws out the eroticism.
He needs to try to get some of his mother in law's backside, stretching her little asshole with his thick cock.
Thanks for the read
I think the MIL needs to get banged more than once per week ! Maybe, she can get his wife to join in the fun ??? Arousing and please give us more....... Thanks !!
good start - sooner or later wife will catch them - then what - waiting lol864A
Thoroughly enjoyed your short story. Both SIL & MIL are lucky to find their callings!!
Well, YES!!! that was good. but I wouldn't have to be blackmailed into fucking my mother in law once, twice or 5 times a week. Good story because it could happen, just like that.....
Keep em cumming!!
Brings back memories of my mil and sil . I plan on writing about that someday soon. You have inspired me!
I like how this started out and the pacing was really good. I would have liked them teasing a bit longer, or being a little less quick to do the deed once she came over, but very solid writing nonetheless! Great job!