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All Comments on 'Sexual Marathon Ch. 01'

by TheOxRocks

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Dam slow start.

If you go so slow it will take forever to finish this story. Need to increase the volume in next chapter. Readers will get bored and stop reading your stories.

TheOxRocksTheOxRocksover 8 years agoAuthor
Stay with it...

Part 2 is where things really start moving. Don't worry. All part of the plan.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
short but well done

thought the build-up was fine.. It is a short chapter so the "slow start" complaint is unwarranted

MarkT63MarkT63over 1 year ago

Slow start to a rape tale?

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