All Comments on 'Sexy Sister in Law Ch. 01'

and an Editor!!

Might be worth reading!!

Tried an editor they didn’t get back to me.

Don’t think it’s too bad considering I’ve never written anything before.

If u don’t like it don’t bitch about it read another story

If you don’t like people bitching about your editing, then don't write another story.

Take no notice of bitching, people who bitch usually don't have any publications themselves

Thank you anonymous. Glad you liked it. Starting part 2 next week.

Start out with information.

If thats your first attempt the nice one, ok there were errors but thats life, its not like im buying a book or short story is it !!

Theres always a dim wit with nothing better to do than criticize anothers work when they havent the balls to identify themselves or do their own publication, there called pussy's, not the nice soft sort, the sort thats a complete cunt 😁🤣😁.

Anyway 3* just try proof read a bit longer next time 👍🏾

Cheers :)

WTF? Think we're here for a Noble Prize for Literature.

Good story line. Enjoyed it.

And.....I couldn’t be bothered finishing your story.

Very poorly written story. Wrote with a very British vernacular that was difficult to understand at times. I'm glad you quit writing as you clearly don't know how. 2*