by MrJack
I don't see why any of our brave service men or women would take offense with your fictional story,It is well written,and has action and sex mixed together very well.
I do feel sad about our young women that are in the military over in that godforsaken place.
Young girls that should be wareing tank tops and short shorts here in the states, are wearing hard hats and kevlar vests ,just to stay alive.Your story is very good,but it also makes me think of all of the heartships that our young women,and men are going through.
Thanks for the good post, and hope to see the next chapter soon.........Rich
Well written story, as ex-military I found nothing offensive about your story. Rather hard to justify some of it but it is fiction right. Keep it coming.
This is a story I would like to read more about...let's keep it coming!
They wont,nearly got shagged to death by a very fit young lady????