All Comments on 'Shadow of a Doubt Ch. 01'

please please what happens next This is great!

great story. please continue

yummy

another chapter please and um, hehe, make it snappy

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OK, I'll admit to a bit of surprise at just how well written this first chapter is. The characters are engaging, the conversation natural yet evocative, and the emotions conveyed are dead-on accurate. The jumble of contradictory emotions is especailly well-stated. It would be a shame if there were no more chapters.

please next chapter very very soon

i am sooo glad You're going to write the next chapter Sir! This one was so hot!

panting in anticipation...

emerald

A tense, highly erotic dynamic is in play, and I look forward to the culmination!

(Ah, the secret shameful fantasy and the excruciating ambivalence of revealing and fulfilling it--one of my pet themes.)

Please note this is a story of 'reluctance' which will include 'non-consensual' aspects later in the story. As this is the ~ Non-consent/'RELUCTANCE' - Fantasies of control ~ category, it is in the correct place.

Apologies for not putting this note at the beginning of the story. Also, this comment replaces the one that appeared at the end of the following chapter.

really loved ur work.wow. i kinda think its every dirty girls desire to be used and this was just too much,the story i mean. has to be one of the best written stories around so far.

This is an excellent story. I really enjoyed reading your story. I just wanted to thank you. You gave me some good ideas.

How do you know?

please yessssssss

continue

Already loving the plot!!!

Was easy to relate to. Very graceful

Absolutely adored this story. This woman is living my fantasy. I would love to see this story continued. Now, to go fantasize...