All Comments on 'Shadows and Light Ch. 04'

This builds so slowly I'm waiting for a major explosion. You have me on tenter hooks. More.

Some backstory, moving a little the plot...okay, I'm dying to read more of this tale. Could you please consider writing longer chapters. These are just too short.

I'm enjoying this story very much and I haven't any complaints about telling of it. I love tales that move slowly in order for you to understand every nuance. Perfect! I'll wait for more patiently.

Enjoying the story. Looking foreward to the next installment.

Simon is there? If not she will be scared shitless!