by Emerald_Dragon
It's always better to take your time and make it the best you can. Great job on these two chapters.
The dream almost-sex was hot! I love this story, and really appreciate the regular updates!
I'm excited to keep reading! I really hope that you develop Isabelle's character more. You've given us a glimpse of her perception and compassion for other people, as well as her inner strength, and I'm curious to know more! Also can't wait for more of her and Ian's romance to blossom!
It is rare that I get hooked on a story line on Literotica, but this has been fantastic. I honestly can't wait to read the rest of the story. Keep up the good work. Hopefully, when this thread is complete, you will see fit to bless us with a whole new storyline.
You are tackling such an interesting and multifaceted storyline with ease - the evolution of characters, story and emotions. Thank you for posting such wonderful pieces!!
It was very hot, though. Mmmmmm.
I can't tell; is Finn a vampire, too? You wrote that it was unusual to have more than one vampire born to a family, so with two vampiric sons it's already a lot.
Maybe I'll find out if I keep reading?
Good idea.