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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
A Really Hot Story

I like the way you took your time to tell the story and not to rush it. It was a story where problems abound and yet they were finally resolved. Above all it was HOT and Sensuous. I'm a sucker for happy endings.

fumunda cheezefumunda cheezeabout 19 years ago
Heaven

This old man can readily see that Al died in rehab and has entered heaven and doesn't know it.

Unfortunately in real life, the fucking women would go to fighting each other like cats and dogs. lol

Thanks for writing a really hot and erotic story. I loved it.

Gary

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wrong

Wrong ending,after she wouldn't take him back on his release from rehab,he should have dumped her.Whilst what he did was wrong,it was with one person,whilst his wife went out and fucked anything with a cock and continued to do so whilst they were separated.He should have rubbed her face in it by taking up with Elaine.

silentsoundsilentsoundover 3 years ago

You're one gay motherfucker.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Agree to keep on cheating, but only with the one woman?

Doesn’t sound like a caring, monogamous relationship to me.

Not one built on trust & love.

Another minus stars if they were an option. As it is, one star.

Bill

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