All Comments on 'Sharing'

Mate, You're a machine! How many stories is that now?

I enjoy your style of writing, but sometimes your story lines are a bit unbelievable. This one is totally implausible. Too much is simply too much!

The only way this would be better is if the roommate got fucked as well:)213B

I'd love to be Debbie, having her fucked across my lap, spanking her arse as Mr Barton's cock slid in and out... My lap covered in pussy juice... Then swallow Mr Barton's cock...lick it clean before burying my face in her cunt... Cleaning it out and making her cum again! Perhaps Mr Barton watching, getting hard and fantasising about her arse...his fingers rubbing Debbie's clit...keeping her keen...

Apart from rape being rape, what was the Math teacher suddenly doing in the room? He sure doesn't like his job, does he? Geez, a little credibility, please. If he had business coming to the female students dorm, fine, but that should be explained. The writer is too lazy or lacks the fantasy to work out a way how the punishment situation can turn lesbian and sexual, so Mr.Dick has to barge in