All Comments on 'Sharing with Mom Pt. 01'

Sound like it’s gonna be another story where the father gets screwed

I have no sympathy for cheating whores who refuse talk to their spouse but are happy to spend all the money they make

This will never be a good story! better stop here! 1*

Fascinating how new stories in here seem to bunch up similarly. There are more than one first time writers on LW today and you have excellent writing skills so we welcome you and need all we can get. It is rare to see anyone with your near perfect word crafting. The only gaff I spotted was in the very first paragraph when you used 'concievable' where I think you meant to prefix the word with 'in'.

You titled this as 01 so I assume more is to come to make something of a story of it. Since you put it in LW one assumes that you intend either for her mom to be found to be screwing around, or maybe for your main character getting married and then becoming unfaithful. The "loving wives" refer to married females who fuck around.

I will look forward to seeing more. I did not rate this one as there was nothing here to comment on. I would have been better if you had at least gone far enough into it to reveal who the intended cheaters would be be.

Another loser story from another loser writer. You'll be the newest to be tossed onto the pile of those to ignore.

Too short, hope you posted the whole story already so we dont forget this brief intro.

well little whore ,help your dad out ,bring one of your whore girls friends over and teach him to please your mother.

Don't bother with the rest of it thank you

First story!

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Please post this garbage in the correct category

Sorry but clearly, this is just the 1st story posted under THIS name.

You've done the same family of skanks thing before, didnt work then, wont work now.

Im glad Odoreater coached you again before you posted so he could give you phony props for this shit.

Not difficult at all to see where this non story is going.

Odiouser thinks it's fascinating to have garbage stories posted. 1*

Nice start. Someone mentioned your first paragraph, the one misspelling, and your good word-crafting skill. Check out the fourth sentence of that paragraph.

I'm surprised Odiouser didn't use his standard what a great word crafter you are in his usual asinine comment.