All Comments on 'Shave and a Hair Cut: Two Bits'

Wish I had more hair left!

5

A very sweet story. I’m glad that Tyler finally pulled his head out of his ass with regard to Dana. Eventually, he too will need forgiveness after saying something thoughtless. Fortunately, Dana now knows Tyler’s kryptonite: Cuddles the Frog! 5*.

Hmmm, not a bad romance. Very cute and fun. There could be a problem in their future with how she responded to her father when she tried to make him stay. But I'd like to be optimistic on this young couples future

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Payenbrant

I liked it, but didn't love it. It was nice, but it felt like it was missing details, and I don't mean the sex. Things advanced, but it almost felt like I was watching a musical montage. I got the general feelings, but none of the emotions. I know what happened, but never really felt like I was *in* the moment once prom was over. 4*

Very well written. Excellent original story. Please keep writing and sharing.

Nice romance.

5 stars

Very nice enjoyable story. Thank you

Nice story, well written. Thanks.

Nice story.

Very nice story. Beautiful characters.

See what happens when you find "cuddles " the frog. Turns into happy ever after!

Thank you for a wonderful and believable love story of two young people. I danced with my first sweetheart when we were 14 years old, and I’m still dancing with her 68 years later. My Mom and Dad were right: she was and is the one. Five big stars for a lovely love story.

Sweet ;-) Thank you.

It was a very enjoyable romantic story. 5stars

Ah! Memories of my ute! (Joe Pesci - "My Cousin Vinnie")

Very well done - but you need to finish the relationship with a sequel!

***** Stars!

I've read alot of your stories - you're a very talented writer!!!!

Burninglove

Well done. A pleasure to read. The comment from Uncle Jack regarding people's perception of what people think about appearances is dead on. How the romance progressed was perfect. details were not necessary to make this story a success. I truly enjoy reading your stories and look forward to reading new ones. K

Moving back home, never a good idea.

Dana has already waved two red flags at him and his mother has waved the third.

Run!

Good story. Felt it could have gone longer. Seemed rushed or just unfinished from the point he came back from college.

Excellent story! Really love reading stories like this one. Brings back plenty joyful memories. Thank you, you are an excellent Author! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

I think your protagonist is written as a self centered, arrogant child. He should have talked to the boyfriend before asking her to the Prom

And Dana had every right to turn him down due to his unkempt look.

She taught him an important life lesson and he basically spat his dummy out.

A great story!

An original plot with a touch of humour. You can always be counted upon for an entertaining read, well-written. Thank you.

Wonderful story, 10 stars! Please write another chapter, and maybe Dana and her husband will give "their mother" grandbabies!

5/5, but seriously FTDS

Great stuff as usual

Barbershop banter was both authentic and perfect!

Good story. His mother was very manipulative, if he’d mentioned that to Dana, she’d probably be able to stop it.

This story brings great memories. Sauce becomes ‘gravy’ when you add meat to the pot. When my grandmother made her gravy, I’d have to contend with my uncle and his sons - we all were stealing meatballs from the fry pan, then fighting for chunks of bread to dip into the gravy. A great pastime. My wife learned all grandma’s recipes and does a good job, but I can’t convince her that baked meatballs don’t get that important crisp outer texture.

Great story, need to continue to see Dana reaction with the ring.

Seemed like the story ended abruptly.

And what about her comment on forgiveness for cheating? Doing anything with that?

Excellent story, on the whole. Tyler was a unreasonably determined to be unforgiving, which detracted from it somewhat, though.

Excellent story. that Dad emptied the bank accounts and abandoned not just his wife, but his only child may offer a hint as to why Mom sought comfort elsewhere.

Good solid fun read! I was entertained and got a couple of laughs!

Please do keep writing and I will keep reading.

Awesome. People should be this lucky in real life.

Nice read, one of those stories that I wish was a little longer, despite my preference for short ones. Tyler's father must have disliked Italian cooking, his loss! Tyler has to have a bit of weirdness to have not just long hair but long unkempt beard. Glad he grew out of that. Gina seemed like the quintessential Italian American Princess and I never pursued those, too high maintenance! Thank God for my part Italian soulmate of 43 years and I wish that for Tyler and Dana. Last, were you trying to imply that Uncle Jack was just a player or actually Mafioso? If you do a follow up, please keep Dana "sweet" and don't have her make any mistakes like her mother; cheating, substance abuse, etc.

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Got to say I really enjoyed it⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Not ending. Great story so far,

Decent story,but Tyler is too stubborn and set in his ways to make a good husband.

Only on page 1 but I have to say this...... There's nothing wrong with a girl that doesn't want to go to prom with some doofus who let his appearance slide. It's absurd to even hint that she's the bad guy, physical attraction is a must. Real immaturity is expecting the world to put up with your bullshit.