All Comments on 'She Hates Me? Not! Pt. 05: Reprisal'

What can I say? I am a fan. I like almost everything you have shared and want to thank you for letting us read your stories.

Pleasusably graphicDeliciousley erotic and definitely poetic in detail

I hope that you continue this story!

I hope you keep going with the story! It's still got a great story and I hope it continues! Maybe a few extra past problems...?

What a sweet and interesting story. Please keep it going.

Give us more!

Can't wait to see what happens next

It's been over a year since this chapter was published. Hoping the babies won't be walking by the time the next chapter comes out. Loved the series, though.

This is so hard (soft?) waiting for the milky boobs) please publish the next chapter!

Good stories, well written if a little too much sex and little character development. For instance, how did our hero go from having too little confidence to even approach Monica in high school to being attractive enough to have her jump his bones before their first date. Would like to read their story five years after the wedding. Would they still be wed? Monogamous? Would Monica revert to being a random cock slut who thinks with her nether parts? More please!

Damn.. was hoping for a 3som with Rachel.

Keep going. Always love the intro of a new female character? Does the family have a hot prude neighbor that sees their life style and disapproves... at first?

A wise man once said "New is always better.... What is better than a hot girl with big tits that youre having sex with?? Her new friend with slightly smaller boobs that you haven't seen yet." - Barney Stinson

The two older "boys" are conspicuous by their absence. Am guessing they might be interested in knowing there is both a baby brother/sister on the way and their sister is married & about to make them uncles. What happens when they appear on the scene? Just curious...

You are an amazing storyteller, I so hope you come back to finish this epic series. I am also curious to what the brother would have to say about all that has happened and finally thank you for telling about a fantasy that every man has dreamt of.

Is Chapter 6 gonna happen?

...on someone (Rachel) whom you have done wrong, makes no sense.

I thought Oh, Baby, What A Sitter! was a better series.

Paul in Oklahoma

Looking forward to the next chapter

Been a good read but needs continuing.

You seem to have several unfinished stories that have been left alone for years now. I hope one day you'll come back to finish them, this one included

So after going through a couple of stories I also see you don't actually finish them. They are good I should have an ending to them this one included

With it was finished but don't expect it be. Good story even if not finnished

Can't understand why I read all five chapters.This is the biggest load of crap I have read this year.

Can't understand why I read all five chapters.This is the biggest load of crap I have read this year.

Shame this is unfinished. The next bit looks like it would have been fun. Too bad although there doesn't seem to be much in the way of drama opportunities without some seriously contrived nonsense. I guess it was a good stopping point in the end.

Please come back and finish all your stories

Wonderful story, but like 99% of your stories, this one is also incomplete. Too bad you don’t have the patience to complete any of your stories, and then go and start another one, as they all are very good.

Too bad this one just ends, like many of the others from this excellent author. Oh well.