All Comments on 'She Painted Up Her Face'

by Cromagnonman

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bruce22bruce22over 10 years ago
Great Work

A truly compassionate story about human beings. It horrified me along the way. I would love to know what Brian wanted to say. His feeling of self-importance destroyed both of them.

ariesgirlariesgirlover 10 years ago

Both Brian and Julia's father both deserve the suffering they are receiving for treating her as they did.

I hope we get to find out if she is going to see Brian.

MitchFraellMitchFraellover 10 years ago
Masterful

One of best stories. Concise and complete.

CumminginsiderherCumminginsiderherover 2 years ago
No likeable characters

In this story. That's the fastest way to kill a story.

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...

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