by sexygirl76
I enjoyed this story. But I think that you need to add a few more chapters of Lisa's adventures in the world of porn.
What I loved was the way he made her cum several times but didn't cum in her. Instead, he pulled out and jerked off all over her belly and the guy watching and jerking off cummed also while she watched them boht jerk off. This was definitely a story worth more than 100 points.
When I read the first two paragraphs I knew I was going to enjoy this story and the line--"had'nt been fucked in over a week and was going crazy" really hit home. Reading the story did'nt get me fucked but it got me off twice and that helped me retain my sanity till I did get laid.
This author is a really talented pornographer and can be proud of that ability to give pleasure to her readers.
Christ I loved this story! Me and Vince however had to be content with cumming on our own.
Incredible and vivid story. Kept me rock hard through the end wishing I were Joe
Wow! Really loved this story!!! Especially as a woman. Glad it didn't end with him cumming on her face or in her mouth. Really had me wishing I was her.