All Comments on 'Sheila Ch. 01'

by Pars001

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SN88 about 6 years ago

It's a good start foresee a very long series to come out of this.

Sxualchocol8 about 6 years ago

Hmmm...

Looks pretty good, Pars. Keep it going!

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senilis about 6 years ago

Now this can be a really good story.

Based upon how this story is starting, I can finally wrap my mind around a believable story without the mythical characters. Keep this plot concept intact without mythical creatures and you will have me rating this story as a TEN-star rating.

alvielee about 6 years ago

Great start can hardly wait to see how this story unwinds.

arrowglass about 6 years ago

Good start with real potential!

Looking forward to following this one!

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