All Comments on 'Sheila Ch. 14'

"I want everyone on triple red alert from now on" . Hmmm, is this along the same lines of logic as "double secret probation"?

So nice to find a writer that, A)can write a damn good story with real characters and emotional committment. And B) is willing /able to finish his stories.

Keep up the good work love reading your stuff !

Then the real best piebald group can take them out. Now if piebald fails, surely the general wouldn't resort to the heretofore unmentioned really real elite best tentacle group that has never failed or been bested?!

Like every other story you do, this has finally passed ludicrous speed and hit plaid. God only knows how you manage to maintain such high scores with this pulp level material.

Just as all your other story’s I can’t seem to get enough. I even start from the beginning with each new chapter. Please keep em coming on every story you do like I said I can’t get enough I love em all so thank you Pars001.

Some of these readers look for too much realism in a scifi/fantasy story. Great work Pars