by Greymead
By all means, after this first passionate intro, explore their emotions, deeper feelings, how she feels, show her need to be the woman on the outside that she is on the inside, showing her feminine mind and heart.
i agree with the previous anonymous comments. i would dearly love to read more . thank you.
So warm and romantic! What a great slow buildup! This has great potential for subsequent adventures! I will be on edge, waiting to hear more! Thanks and keep me up, err it up! Luv n kisses, AmiLil