All Comments on 'She's Got Legs'

A bit short, but that's just my taste, and the speed of the story conveyed the message of the passion of the encounter. You could have put more information in about what was happening, try using more senses, what did her mouth feel like (a simile maybe?), what did she smell like, what noises did she make? Generally though a very hot short story, well done and thank you.

Very hot, and well-written. You get better with every story Lenny.

You surprised me! You kept this really skilfully under control. Don't take any notice of the comment that says it's too short. It's perfect for what it is. <i>Perfect</i> - not a word too many, not a word too few. Well-handled. Yes, you're improving all the time. I REALLY enjoyed this, and it's not one of my favourite story types at all. But your writing was completely convincing…

Erotic story well written, held my interest though too short!