All Comments on 'She's Owned by Much Older Man'

Do not get discouraged the story was not as bad as the others made it seem. If you like this type of kink just write what you feel and let it flow. Fantasize and put it to words, live it in your mind first then put it down.

Thanks,

Joel

Do not listen to the negative comments. You will never please everyone. Just write from your heart. Keep up the good work.

These people MUST be the sadistic type Doms, because it looks like they only get off on making others feel bad...

It's true your writing could use some editing, but overall I think you've done a pretty good job. Like someone else said, you write from the heart and the story has potential. I like the older male/younger female and humiliation themes and there's a lot you can do to expand on those. In fact, I think by not going into such great detail now you left yourself an opening to think on and expand both the characters and the plot.

If you'd ever like editing help or just an extra reader, I'd be happy to help.

Good job :)

please keep writing about these 2 i love it .

You cannot please 100% of the people 100% of the time. If people do not like this story--there are plenty others out there!!!! I enjoyed it and would read the next installment.

Add more about her being used maybe shared ao whored out by older Dom, maybe to group of older horny men.

Don't listen to those that bitch, lets see thier stories if they are such experts

Work on your writing skills and proof reading. As for content I enjoyed putting myself into both characters. Hope you continue writing.

Would love to hear their next encounter.

I really enjoyed this story and would like to hear more.

Do continue :)

I think I read enough.

Continue the story, please! It is very interesting!

Please continue!

Excellent, I would love to use my Thirty something colleague just like that, she is such a flirt, always flashing her stocking tops and dropping hints, and referring to me as daddy when no-one else is around.....