All Comments on 'She's Submissive'

Everyone: We don’t really like stories about rape.

Ashton: Here’s a bunch of stories about rape.

I liked that you got into both Rob's and Michelle's heads, to describe the goings on. Very nice; maybe not overly realistic, but then, it might be, too. You never know, do you? 5*

That phrase alone is worthy of the "5". May I steal it?

Don't care for the switching POV/narrator- sure I know lots of big time authors do it, but we know also that Dickens is criticised for it in Bleak House, considered by many the best novel of the 19th century.

Her narrative- the turmoil, the submission- rocks. I could mentally picture it.

I know that the one page story is your wheelhouse, and you do it well, but more detail in the sex would always be appreciated.

Chuck comes with her... and uses the hammer she forgot on both her and Rob.

I have read a lot of stories with POV changes, but this story had me totally confused.

Ashon! You are the best at (consensual), non-consent. Love it.

I liked it 5* worth.

Time saver. See author, no need to read or score.

doing or saying anything because of hearsay is a big no-no. TK U MLJ LV NV

Dangerous sending her to a single man's house, especially when you have told him her switches.

Ok it's fiction, but something up front about Chuck telling one of them to try it would have made this story more realistic even within that universe.

Needs more story to get above a three Thanks for your effort.

Writing was consistently concise and direct but not rough. Good job at a quick one-pager.

Even the very best of women will be tempted by the promise of great sex and appreciation, Even if they don't follow through, they will still think about it.

Those who are subs and have been successfully subdued once will always go back for more. It's their thing, and they love it.

Well that’s put a smile on my face, a good old sex story written for the hand of a young man and puts a feel good feeling on us olders.

I think that’s rape

Such a cool story.