All Comments on 'She's Surviving at Home'

by me_akron

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
so why don't they divorce and get married?

she doesn't seem to love her husband anymore.

so why don't the 2 cheaters divorce their spouses and get married? why keep on cheating and risk getting caught with all its problems and legal consequences?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Let's see what happens

I am not especially enamored with the story. It is fairly well written, no major errors that usually distract me, but it seems to have little emotion. It is possible she is trying to show how little emotion was involved in the womans life up to the point she decided to changer her situation, but I am not sure.

1. The man is a jerk. He does not want a life so therefore the wife cannot have one either. He does not like sex therefore she cannot like it either. The TV is his because he paid for it--she is not allowed to have a job. I am genually surprised that more husbands of this type do not end up dead. (Probably because the paperwork is such a pain in the ass!!!!)

2. I personally like the cheating spouse stories, so this is a category I read much of the time. Should the woman continue or get a divorce and move on. Good questions for a future update on the characters. She has found that life does exist outside her self-imposed prison. REmember people love and respect of your spouse goes beyond "just not cheating." It also means respecting your partners needs as well.

Thanks for allowing my rant--JimDinMN

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Very Good!

While I don't find webcams very exciting, personally, I did enjoy reading a woman's perspective on this subject. It was very well written and totally believable. I believe there probably are many woman out there in similar circumstances.

For your critics, I find it the height of hypocrisy to search out erotic stories, only to sanctimoniously criticize the author's morality for their work without even knowing if the story is fantasy or fact, which is irrelevant, really.

Don't let these small-minded people get to you. Best of luck and thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Damn.

I liked your story very much. I'd love to hear about your first time in the hotel room; the first touch, the first view of his body, the first touch. I like to learn what was going through your mind the first time his tongue touched your nipple, your belly, your pussy. Tell us about that first initial thrust, the slow pressure and the feeling of fullfillment as he filled a void that had been yearning for so long. Tell me more. Your story was so sexy.

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