All Comments on 'Shhhh! Sister Finds Out Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice ending...

I always like to end a good story with a downer. (SARCASM)

You should have just left that out.

Bfreetorun

unicorn64unicorn64almost 11 years ago

I never understand when a man ejaculates so soon. I guess of the 100 or so men I have been with none would qualify as a master. In every instance as soon as they ejaculate they are done. I want to find a man who can last so long and redo it so I can finally have an orgasm. Maybe by the time I get to 65 it will happen. But somehow I don't think it will. I also don't think that the son and his mother are together in heaven. Nor are they in hell together enjoying this. Satan will be their Master.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

AYE, AND THAT IS THE WAY YOU WRITE A STORY...except the sad ending, but even that made the storyline work so well.

I am looking forward to more!!

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a2 months ago

Excellent story but a terrible ending. I do not see what the problem was with the son. If his mother wanted to belong to him what is the problem? The father has the daughter. Seams like a win-win situation to me.

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My first story was the confession of a Combat Friend. Then I wrote stories others told me. Then I just wrote to pass the time. Been away for a while, doing life stuff as an old man. 2-27-24: I'm just passing time and writing due to events in the lives of people I know.

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