by KeithD
Very good storey I should also like to see another one from you if possible
There were a few editing slip-ups. Still, I gave it 5 stars for your ingenuity with a potentially trite set up. I do wish it had been longer, though, and that both Big and the narrator had been better developed. However, their passion for each other made this a very creative and enjoyable read.
I gave it 5 stars for your ingenuity with a potentially trite set up. There were a few editing slip-ups, but we almost all find a few of those those after we publish. I do wish it had been longer and that both the mains had been developed further. On the whole, however, a very enjoyable read.
With someone making love to me like that I wouldn't leave either ;O)
This is almost a love story...the shipwrecked man makes a decision to seat with the ape man -- the gorgeous black man that should have s bit of delicious chest hair! Give them another chapter to love and explore each other...and maybe even learn to communicate!
I would not have left either cause I absolutely know what it feels like to be in Heat for a man and his dick sounds amazing.
Lovely. I could almost feel Big’s anxiety and desperation at the prospect of losing the wonderful companion he had found. He must have been so lonely before. Really happy they stayed together. That tenderness and care we all hope for can turn up in the most surprising ways and packages.