All Comments on 'Shock Wave'

A really well-written and extremely erotic story, one of the best of its type I have read in a long while. I thoroughly enjoyed every word of it and I hope you will consider writing more of this fascinating Dominatrix for us.

Five stars, my sincere thanks and, as always, more, please!

Incredibly erotic

You have a good writing style, I'll give you that.

I really enjoyed this story as it progressed, and I am glad that I saw your post in the forum because otherwise I would have missed it. If this had been posted in the BDSM category I surely would have found it on my own. I think my only other mild criticism is that the first couple of paragraphs felt a tiny bit stilted compared to the rest.

Still only "nine." Surely this must continue?

I think I speak for a lot of people, when I say, Please continue this awesomely beautiful story.

Very hot. Love that it's more about what is not said!!! As everyone else has commented; hope you can give us another chapter. Well done!

Blackrabbit711

I find myself returning to this story time and time again, It has stayed with me long after my first reading, I would love for it to continue, but I can also see if you would choose not to. But thank you for writing it.

As a writer it is deeply gratifying that my story has moved you and is something more than a quick read. I would enjoy bringing back the Dominatrix, but have not yet imagined a scenario that respects and builds upon the events in 'Shock Wave.' Alas, muses are fickle creatures...

Yep, still coming back. Safe to say, your story has haunted me, in more ways then one, and again, thanks for writing it.

Wow. This story was hot, intense, wonderfully written.... amazing. The perfect people can meet at the perfectly wrong time, and some mistakes can never be forgotten.

I hope you write many more.

Did she stay or run away?

This writing is truly an exquisite art form. Please don't stop with these characters.

Geez, this is so lyrical, beautifully written. And if anyone is keeping a record... My vote says 'she' left and did not return.

Elegant and wonderful and physical! Love this, keep writing!

A really excellent read. Please keep writing. :)

I love your work! Thank you for checking out mine.

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