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TurbidusTurbidusover 7 years agoAuthor
Hhmm

I noticed some of the editorial comments were included. That's what happens when you rush. Turbidus

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
So worth the wait!

I have really enjoyed the story so far. I love the characters' development and complexity - now what will you do with Kent? I can't wait for the next chapter. Your writing is such a treat! Thank you. Subdued

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lovely

I liked this chapter much more than the others. There's a gentle, contemplative feel to it, and Randy is so much less negative and annoying. I enjoyed that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Somewhat sad Matt went for Liam instead of Randy...

jakeontheboxjakeontheboxover 5 years ago

still got me. you're a great writer.

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Life got awfully busy for a time. I hope to add a few stories again.

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