All Comments on 'Shopping'

by nigelfannypatter

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kendahl6969kendahl6969about 17 years ago
Cleanup, Deli Dept.!

This was a great take on the 'supermarket exhibitionist' genre, superbly detailed and written well! The husband tagging along added to the story as well.

txnjiffytxnjiffyabout 17 years ago
about time.

I enjoy Loving Wives stories but most are so obviously made up or the wife is already into doing such things or the couples are already or have been involved in exhibition or swinging.BORING. I like the conservative soccer moms that have not and would never think of doing such a thing but for one reason or another find themselves in that position.

I rated it a 75, but had he accidentally slipped inside a couple of times, I would have given a 100.

Thank You for the realistic story.

odie121odie121about 17 years ago
very good...

..story...they should have a lot more fun in the future... I'm glad you didn't turn it into some kind of gangbang...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Most stores have cameras attached everywhere.

And health regulations abound with regard to food service and delis. To let someone behind the counter alone is a major no no. To let them use a piece of equipment that is easily contaminated is enough to close the store. Her going in back with no skirt told her husband what she was going to do and by not going back or stopping it, he gave permission for her to have sex with the guy. Now we have unprotected sex with a stranger, and the medical risk associated with this. Hubby now has a slut wife, she didnt need to take the sperm into her to qualify altho she never really said she didnt, who acted without husbands very permission. So we can assume this adventure is not sane, not safe, and not consensual. On a normal IQ scale I can give both hubby and wife together a total score of average, 100, you determine with one gets more than a 50! Trash is trash, and in this case both are trash.

rsmart82rsmart82about 17 years ago
very hot

very hot pls send the exibitionist & loving wives stories like this. which is slowly seducing to peak level. especially the skirt slipping concept is too hot . keep it up. hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttt

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More please!

Don't listen to the naysayers here - this is the type of erotic story that is all too rare even in the exhibitionist section. Now, we want to read about the wife getting the paper nude, answering the door nude, flashing the deliveryman, milkman, mailman etc...don't keep us waiting!

skip.69skip.69over 15 years ago
You have talent

And so has your wife. Good job, though, that she did not sit on the meat slicer, or the shop-keeper would have got behind in his work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Outstanding

Keep up the excellent work. I don't know why other people have talked about health regulations and video cameras etc. This is a work of fiction. If anyone is so interested in health regulations, I am sure there are tons of PDFs they can download from the government websites - and read till their eyes pop out. That's the beauty of the web. If you don't like what's on your screen - try another URL.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
DON'T STOP NOW

More loved it keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Yummy !!!!!!!

I wish you would write more please :) esp about this couple ...Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
The Pussy Slide!

My wife wanted to preserve her virginity until the wedding night. So, we experimented with several different sexual activities during our courtship. But, my favorite was the pussy slide. It is, at the same, time extremely erotic and extremely frustrating, for both partners.

We have started to explore the concept of her becoming sexually active with other men. So, I´ll ask her if she wants to relive the good old days by doing a pussy slide with a man as her debute.

Very hot story; thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Some fond memories

My wife is huge tease and even though I wanted her to have sex with other men, she would refuse penetration. She would usually do handjobs or panty slides with guys. She was pretty naive and when she drank she loosened up so I convinced her to let men rub against her uncovered pussy but not inside. I remember watching her once in our hotel room, her skirt was up and her yellow satin panties were slid to the side. The man she picked up had his pants pulled down and was laying on the bed. My wife was over him. She told him no touching and no penetration. I watched my wife for about 5 minutes slide her pussy along his cock. She came once already and I could telling she was close again.

I didn’t know his name but seeing his precum on her pussy was incredible. He obviously wanted to slide in her but my wife was in control. His cock was wet and I might have let him if my wife agreed. As she slid back and forth sitting on him, the tip would be inside her. She had no idea that he was getting a bit inside her or how much precum was getting rubbed into her. This turned me on even more.

He said he was about to cum and my wife told him to cum on her pussy and she continued to slide up and down his cock. He started squirting all over his stomach. She continued to slide and I know she was getting some inadvertently inside her. She came again and slide back off his cock. I give him a towel, my wife gave him a passionate kiss and she walked him to the door. We had sex twice that night and did this a few other times when on vacation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The years have not changed the "hotness" of this tale. Well done. Please return and write a sequel.

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