All Comments on 'Short Story: Unfinished Business'

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chootkabhootchootkabhootalmost 13 years ago
sad and pathetic

it's nice to have a brother and wife like steve. you don't need enemies with them around

peebudypeebudyalmost 13 years ago
brotherly love!

great story...I love the initial build up and the 3 years of frustration after nearly getting caught in the kitchen.

maybe they'll convice Steve to join them on How's return trip??!!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
I wonder if she got knocked up

That would be kinky as hell if Joe knocked her up before he went back to his ship.

A good story, erotic and kinky, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Another niggers sick fantasy.

Mindless and talentless. 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good stuff

Pretty exciting. But I'm positive I'd never fuck my sister in law, however I did fuck my mother in law several years ago but only for one day when her husband was called away to Venzuela for his oil company. We had always semi flirted but never serious on my part at least. But she obviously took it serious because when he left she ask if I could stay with her for a day or two. One thing led to another and we wound up in the sack with the most erotic love making of my life. But never again... yet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Learn propper nigger grammar !

Its 'budnis' !! "1*" !

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