All Comments on 'Shorts Pt. 01'

I presume the group activity comes in later episodes, but you are missing the entertainment gained by posting in Loving Wives, surely? No other category has a commentariat like those who infest LW.

Lue

were the punch line

So an actual middle aged overweight couple going to up the ante? Love the saggy Boobs, Horsecock too big for shorts and realistic moctezuma's revenge details.

Yes, the group sex stuff is coming in later sections. My original plan for this was to have each part be a different scene with different actors. Like Fantasy Island. With a running concept and interactions between each part, then tying the different lines together. Each part would be "short" and have something about short, shorty, or shorts in each part.

I then realized 2 things: 1) I had written part 1 in 1st person POV and didn't want to write a story with changing POV, and 2) I like June and JT so much that I couldn't stop writing them.

So, I will likely include ELEMENTS of my original plan in the overall story, but it will be primarily June and JT's story.

I thought about putting it in LW, which is where I write most of my stories. But, it's more about happy people having extra-marital fun... and that is usually not something that is appreciated in LW. This story is about swinging and group fun, so I felt it would be better to put it in Group Sex.

KB

Sadly, it is rare for them all to occur together, KB.

Lue

Should be coming soon

KB, obviously JTis to blame. No telling June it’s a Swinger Resort, Clothing choices, Drinks and allowing Whitey to fondle June. Then being gone gave Whitey the wrong impression. He’s lucky Whitey tosses down the shorts or he might not have seen June until the morning. Thank You and headed to Pt. 2 now.