All Comments on 'Should Old Acquaintances?'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent

Well written, very erotic, very well done. Like any internet site with public postings, there is some really crappy writing. Not in this case. Outstanding.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wow

Fantasy or not, this is outstanding stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Real and involved

This story is as real as possible without delving into mood-breaking awkwardness. It's warm, emotive, and erotically expressive. Thank you for taking the time to keep us in your character's minds instead of jarring us into a third-person flurry of descriptions of genitals. This is definitely the best story I've read on Literotica in two years, and it's getting saved in my best-list.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Well Done!

Involving and realistic. Sex scenes extremely well done, so

much so, I found myself a tad disappointed that the final scenes were rushed through. I am one reader who would love a sequel that was more detailed about the play that took place with the others.

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