All Comments on 'Show Girl'

Cute story and I suppose it really does happen occasionally. Your stories are often the only bright spot in a desert of poor writing. Thanks.

One of the laws of the universe is that women choose their mates. With that in mind, I really like how the author wrote the young lady in this story - sexy and good-hearted. Five stars!

If it had been in LW, everybody would be waiting for her to cheat and betray him. And the comments would have been brutal. As it is, I know I read too many LW stories, because I was thinking some of those seedier thoughts anyway.....

But here in romance, we can actually believe that there is a real budding love story between these two, however unlikely it might be. It was almost.....sweet, in its own way. So thanks MGM!

He likes to look, and she liked to be looked at. Seems like a perfect match.

Well Done!

A delightful romance with the correct culmination and lots of erotic moments.

Some guys may not mind their woman getting up on stage and taking all her clothes off in front of a bunch of half-drunk horny men, but I sure as hell would. I guess this story really just isn't "my cup of tea".

Would have liked it to be a bit nastier, but I'm a happily ever after kind of guy so I loved it.