All Comments on 'Show Me Yours'

However, I just kept getting "sucked" in. I would like to have a friend like Jimmy and a roommate like Todd. It would be fun to make the fantasy a reality.

Next time someone says show me yours, show them a fist to the head

.......really good..........

Made my dick hard right away because I had a similar experience as a youngster.

Sucking dicks is a fantasy that comes true for me every now and then. I would do it every day but for the STD scare.

Nicely done.

That was incredible! The fact that the story really incorporated the plot in the sex made it super hot! I don't know if you'd write another part for this, but I do know I would really like to see more. Anyways, you're a very talented writer, so keep writing. (;

get 2 or more good male friends in a room and yes this will happen they will discover a very natural thing that the great fun you get with girls is quite amazing but try your best male friend and it is a different amazing great fun best of both world hard cock to play with you try it and you will always want to have some handy around to play

yes guy are much more simpler they horny and always ready , carry on sharing the fun

That was pretty fucking awesome. I enjoyed it a lot, and not just for the sexual aspect. You're a good story teller. I loved your main character, and his no labels attitude. Keep writing.

I sure would like to make it a quartet. These guys sound like a fun bunch.

Reminds me backstage of a Funky Bunch concert I went to in the late 80's

In reviewing the comments I noticed that no one commented on the subtle humor of this story. I laughed all through it, knowing he was being set up by a master. Good job. It's nice to read a story that's sexy and funny.

I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I came in the middle of the story but had to finish reading it till the end which at times it rarely happens. I usually start reading and right after I cum I stop reading and x the window. Not this story, good job on capturing my attention from beginning to end.

I actually didn't spot the twist until about page 3. I had enjoyed the story until then, now i loved it even more. A good original plot, excellent writing (compliments to patientlee) and a hot topic. Keep it coming, please!

A great story which I loved reading.

The characters were well developed and I enjoyed reading about them. A great plot twist which was a lot of fun.

Quite a few things I rarely see in erotic stories.

Working on something deeper like this myself.

Good work

Please tell me this is a true to life or based on actual events story ? you should write a novel man, the detail was intense and kept me interested, i have written many of erotic shorts, was thinking of doing a novel with a few different authors and introduce it to the GLBT community. I'm sure it would sell.

cummtoring and so hard reading this story and so much cum to eat

loved the story, best I have read !

Added this story to my favorites. Great job. We need more gay stories from you. Very well written.

This is what Literotica can be!

Thanks so much.

Started at 13, showing dicks between a friend and I. Played with each other's penises and shot loads!

Wonderful story with great buildup and oh-so-hot descriptions and lusty sex! Loved it!

Well written and exciting build up to the end. I enjoyed reading the experience of how he developed. Great work

I loved the whole setup and I really liked Jimmy too 💕

Brought back so many hot memories of my roommate. I resisted, He persisted. I gave in. In less than a month became his cocksucket on demand

Done the mm thing mmf and ffm thing always wanted the mmm hopefully soon

Great setup...well played by the roomie..

Nicely done. Being turned on by another hardon is extremely exciting. The look and feel of some one else’s boner can get you as hard as any pussy, maybe harder. The fantasy can be nearly as good as the real thing. Exploring sex as a teenager with other horny guys was so much fun. We hadn’t discovered any stigma about being gay. We just knew that it felt good and why not enjoy the experience for what it was. A good time for everyone. We looked, we touched, we stroked, and we sucked. Nobody felt “gay.” It just felt good to do it with others and squirt cum on each other’s thigh as we jerked each other off and came hard. Being bi is the best of both worlds. Your writing skills are excellent. The editing could use some help. 5-😊😊😊😊😊

Great read and hook. You developed a good story and characters that engaged the reader. If anything you may have continued with the MC and Todd going all the way. All in all, good complete story. Thanks for sharing.