All Comments on 'Shrouded Longings'

Few stories are better than this. The passion and emotions in this story are simply raw and intense.Great job and keep writing! ;)

Enjoyed your story very much. You captured the angst of the teen's fear of rejection perfectly. Most young people never think of the consequences of their behavior in the "heat of the moment" as it were. Don't stop now you rascal, do it again! John

write a sequel, though none is really needed. You wrote a complete, but open ended, story. However, it would be nice to have 1, or 2, followup stories to finish things from the perspective of both Sarah and Jackson, including their parent's views.

Good luck, and keep up the good work!

I really loved this wonderful story, i would appreciate that you write a followup.Thank you for writing this story

Excellent story. It's good as is, but a sequel would be nice.