All Comments on 'Shudder Ch. 01'

Very good story

When is ch 2 coming out

I love this... bodyhoppers are some of my favorite stories because they are so carnal, I hope this is a very, very long series. Derick would be an idiot if he didn't hook up with Nevyn .

Wow is all I can say

This is one of the best story ideas I've read in a long time. Kind of reminds me of the movie "The hidden" or "The fallen" but with it's own twist.

Glad everyone seems to be enjoying this so far. I just submitted chapter 4 so look for it in a couple days. And yes, Fallen was my original inspiration for this story. I really like the idea of someone being able to swap bodies via touch, and what it would mean if they ever found someone they couldn't possess. In my mind, it has always had a definitive beginning and ending, which should be in chapter 5.

Great concept, well written technically and character wise. Look forward to reading the rest....