by orie
Keep up the good work, looking forward to the rest of the story.
This sounds like the beginning to a great story ... looking forward to additional chapters!
this looks to be a good one....keep up the good work, can't wait to read much much more!!!
I like stories that have some plot and substance to them. I especially like it when I feel like I get to know the characters. I'll be looking for subsequent submissions.
I love an author that starts out with background info on the characters. Can't wait to get to part 2.
Thanks for sharing!
with all of that time in basketball lockerrooms it is difficult to sell the "extreme" shyness you are presenting.
But yes, if Ann has been an athlete that long, nudity shouldn't be an issue.
I know this story was published a while back but I just found it and I love the slow build up. Moving on to the next chapter.... BTW - 5 stars for this one.....
RecHiker