by YDB95
Well done ... though I think you could have made Eric even more of a cad.
The Penny / Joe connection works well. And being of a certain age myself, I'd like to read more of a story about Jan, too.
Nice luv duvy tale.well wrote I'd say.im a reader not a writer.anywho gave you a five.
That was amazing! I have a sister like that! But the only thing I ever accomplished was becoming a widow on my only marriage where my sister is twice divorced. You did a great job keeping me interested.
great story &what aterrible sister. liked the way the story ended.the wicked got what was coming to them.