All Comments on 'Sibling Rivalry'

by YDB95

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Ranger001Ranger0013 months ago

Full of angst right up to the bitter end! Well written! 5🌟

DrizdartDrizdart3 months ago

Well done ... though I think you could have made Eric even more of a cad.

The Penny / Joe connection works well. And being of a certain age myself, I'd like to read more of a story about Jan, too.

Fifty41Fifty413 months ago

Nice luv duvy tale.well wrote I'd say.im a reader not a writer.anywho gave you a five.

SoNaughtySoNaughty3 months ago

That was amazing! I have a sister like that! But the only thing I ever accomplished was becoming a widow on my only marriage where my sister is twice divorced. You did a great job keeping me interested.

LITTLEbill862LITTLEbill8623 months ago

great story &what aterrible sister. liked the way the story ended.the wicked got what was coming to them.

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