All Comments on 'Sibling Rivalry'

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Just@FanJust@Fanabout 10 years ago
Short but sweet

So glad you have returned to share with us yet another lovely tale. Hope to read more from you soon. Until then I remain...

realitycheck701realitycheck701about 10 years ago

Nice to see you back Lucia. Great story. :)

Are you going to narrate this one? I have to admit, I had your delicious voice in my head as I was reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
You're back!

Excellent story. You're writing style is phenomenal. I, and several others would LOVE to see a sequel to this, as it is set up to be a perfect 2-3 parter.

Thanks for posting yet another fantastic story. Please keep posting more!!

visioneervisioneerabout 10 years ago

What terrific fun to read another Lucia adventure. And what a kinky twist to introduce a sister... loved the jealous rivalry between them. Nice work.

Thunderhead69Thunderhead69about 10 years ago
Excellent Story

Another great story from the wonderfully erotic mind of GYL. It is a nice surprise to see this story in the incest/taboo category. Great dialogue between to like minded sisters who both love fellatio! The ending to this one only begs for a sequel or two or more. I will be patiently waiting for your next tale of wicked eroticism, Lucia. Always, your #1 fan! RDC

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Amazing

This was yet another nearly perfect story from GYL. Please continue the adventure soon!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow

Absoloutely loved the detail and the story. Should definitely continue.

IwannadoitnowIwannadoitnowover 9 years ago
Lady friend, S

I have a lady friend who is really a size queen. So while this isn't the best written story I've seen, the size of the featured cock will not be soon matched.

So S Darling, this one's for you!

masterandmargaritamasterandmargaritaover 7 years ago
5 stars

Great start, looking forward to reading the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
PLEASE

More on the rivalry of Lucia and her sister.

RockHerWorldRockHerWorldover 4 years ago
Very Hot story

I really liked your writing and the story.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
Poor Ian...

He doesn't have many lines? :+))

And he's reduced to being a mere sex Object?

But then..."There are no small roles...Only small actors"?

Where do I sign up for a cameo role? :+))

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