by SPEN STERLING
A fucking sizzling hot story that held the reader in a vise . I do hope you give us a part 2 .
Wow !!!
THANK YOU
This is definitely one of the best sibling sex stories I have read on this site. The tension and desire building up between them burned so hot it could melt steel. I love how you allude to him thinking he was dreaming when he was fucking his sister. It leaves the readers to wonder if he actually did or not though the sister claims it didn't happen. And the ending of this was just fantastic, how the sister who was a professed lesbian admits to her brother and herself that perhaps she was not fully lesbian brought about by desiring her brother's cock. Please bring another chapter to this tale. I would love to see her take her brother as her only male lover.
Loved this story and it needs a second part....
Just please don't rush it into a full-on fucking frenzy. Keep it building up and I'm sure it will be great.
Very good writing...keep it up!
Well done indeed. One of the best stories yet. Siblings can be a big help to each other. Many times someone has to overcome the fear and make the first step. You set it up so well with the lesbian slant. Good on ya
Very very good story i'm sure u wil bring it on with a part two & just keep up the good writing. This is the best one i have read yet the brother & sister thing was great even with out sex really yummy yummy .
She was/is nothing like the sister in this great story. This one actually loves her brother! Well written and HOT! Thanks.
Very well written, and the description of the build up to his "resolution" was as frustrating for me as it was for him (no no, that's good! it was the writer's intent!). And I just knew the orgasm was going to be epic. <i>WOW!</i>
This story needs to continue. Maybe James will become a sex therapist for Jesse and 'cure' her lesbianism.
That was one of the best I've read. Well written and and the tension build was perfect. Need to continue this story.
WOW!!!! That was an excellent submission. The slow build up between the two sibs was fantastically erotic. I would love to see this story continue a bit further - but, only with that same slow torturous build.
You know I loved your story and i do hope you continue it. The characters were well developed and the whole therapy was hot! Please continue pleasing us with your wonderful and sexy writing :)
This is a freaking awesome story!!! Can't wait for the continuation!
I sure as hell hope you have more to add to this story. Very nice.
I agree with the others, awesome story! Really hope you continue it.
WOW - What a great story - the detail, arousal and certainly making you feel you are part of it !! I hope you write another chapter very soon. I think Jessie will now want to get her brother's help in determining if she is really a lesbian or not !! She can work him up and then try him out.
The cumming part was absolutely intense. I think your readers will appreciate that happening plus. Thank you :)
VERY good story,keep it up,I want to see what happens next...:D
Time for bro to repay the favor and help his sister see if she is a true lesbian or not!
Without a doubt, you are easily the best writer I have found in the ten years I've been reading through literotica.
The way you build tension is sublime and the dialogue is actually believable.
Thankyou. Please keep writing.
V
Great writing. Suspenseful build. Good character development. I encourage you to do more writing about siblings. You have a real gift.
That was incredible ! The buildup to the final encounter and explosive orgasm was nothing short of amazing. I was hard the whole time as well . Good job. Needs one more chapter. A definite 5. More please.
Teija psykologisisko ja minä menimme yöksi hotelliin. Huoneessa oli vain yksi sänky.
Vastaanotto oli kiimainen. Nussin siskon pillua paljaalla. Thaimaassa olimme avioparina. Rachel serkku näki meidät sängyssä ja tuli kolmen kimppaan.
It is unheard of to believe a Brother could turn his Lesbian Sister straight,and get her to actually have sex with him,but ironically Jesse broke her own rule that they would not have sex.So Jesse freely disregarded her own rules and penetrated her pussy on her brothers cock.
It was basically inevitable for Jesse to remain strictly clinical watching her brother night-after-night walk around naked without being attracted to his erect cock.Hell just reading how Jesse was literally hypnotized by her brothers staff guaranteed Jesse would turn from lesbian to straight.
And her comment about how she wanted James to imagine she was his girlfriend was her way of telling James she wished she was his girlfriend and wanted him completely. Honestly I think that would be a brilliant idea and they become a brother and sister couple,but if Jesse's girlfriend comes back maybe Jesse can convince her to be in a threesome relationship with her and her brother and have lots of straight and bisexual sex between the three of them.