All Comments on 'Siblings and Lovers Ch. 03'

Your knack of cliffhanger endings keep readers on edge. Well done again

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Didn't expect it to go in this direction, but keep writing more. Great series so far.

Great reading continue writing.

Everything is moving so fast. WOW!

sorry

It is a very creative plot, but that said, sometimes readers may not share with your imagination. I suggest 1. Taking it slow as to not make such a dramatic plot unreallistically dramatic and 2. More realistic and mellow plot. This is going off the charts.

No single vehicle was or even now are allowed out of the compound on its own, you say 2 miles away from base, never would that happen !!

RMCR