All Comments on 'Siblings and Lovers Ch. 04'

A little more, but soon

Could you write more. Could you also concentrate more on just the siblings since it seems like there is so much going against them spending time just for the two of them.

sounds like trouble brewing and a fight between stella and his sister

I had a whole half of a pages typed on thephone but it wouldnt et me submit it. I went on and on about how touching and brilliant this story is. He and his sister need each other. I want tonsee where Stella fits and what happens with his siter. Do they stay together and keep it a secret? Voted 5 stars

You are an incredible writer and with him meeting Stella and she telling him who she is made me cry, as I am an Epileptic with grand mal seizures and reading that brought back all the times I have had seizures and people are too afraid to help because it is scary and you are right we are a dead weight when unconscious. It is so refreshing to see there is kindness still around... but I digress

Am enjoying the realism and heartache of these two and can't wait to read more