All Comments on 'Siblings with Benefits Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent!

I hope this isn't the last chapter.

klaxxklaxxalmost 14 years ago
I hate almost everything about this series

but I can't stop reading it. What really does it for me is the bond Mark and Megan have. I absolutely adore how you have developed their characters. You seem to be one of those rare few writers that can make just about any situation work well. Please keep up the excellent work. I can't wait to read more! 10/10.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 13 years ago
WOW

You have an amazing gift too be able to weave this story so well and completely, I'm loving it! Abso Fuckinglutely Fantastic

Great work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
HORRIFIYING!!

WTF DID I JUST READ?? YOUR SICK!! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?! YOU NEED HELP!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
WTF?!

I realize that this might not be everyones cup of tea and everything, but I do so 'love' when people come into this section and condemn the authors for fantasy. Don't like the topic? Don't read it... And I LOVE this story btw!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Had a little trouble

I personally never like being told what to do, asked...yes thats fine. Ordered, not so much. I think I understand Megan's need to control and why Mark goes along it. It's a form of safety for her. Mark plays along out of love for his big sister. She insulted him badly, and hurt him with her words after he gave her a light teasing remark. She realized she went too far, but since she is the one in "control" she can't say that what she said was wrong even though it was. The closest she can get is to drop back into the realm she created with her brother of "control". I find it almost laughable that she is the one in control since Mark sounds big and dangerous enough that he could break most people in half while only getting a light sweat. It will be interesting to see how well Megan can use the leash she has on Mark's heart. "Poke the mildest dog too much and he may bite." I hope Megan proves worthy of the trust that Mark is showing her...I am having a little trouble with this, but am very interested so far. For all those people who are saying this is a sick story, take a look at the other places they put their comments, I did. You may be surprised at what they all consider hot. A few of them really like those nonconsent reluctance type stories. Really? Ya'll gonna rip on this when you get your stones off to that? Seems like a double standard to me. Anyway, LC...so far your doing good. Can't say I will like everything you write, but each time it's a learning experience for me! :-) Sincerely, PB

blackknight314blackknight314about 1 year ago

Good job, and thanks for sharing

Marklynda2Marklynda29 months ago

Flash back just to help us remember how things were, those of us with CRS Disease (Can't Remember S..t Disease thank you). Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

4chuckssite4chuckssite4 months ago

Memories are made of this! The story is more alive when we get the whole history.

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